My Paragraph

Hi, guys welcome back to my blog. Today our teacher gave us a  task to make a paragraph with a simple to complex, two W start a sentence and one very short sentence. I made one about me running away from home. Here is what I have done.

 In the morning he ran away scared and crying in bare feet. There it was. My Mum. Who told you I ran away? When did you get here because I just ran away? I was shivering in fear. I knew I was in trouble but I did not care.

Here is also how I made the simple to the complex sentence.

He ran away.

He ran away scared.

In the morning he ran away scared.

In the morning he ran away scared in bare feet.

 In the morning he ran away scared and crying in bare feet. 

my starting sentence

Hi this week we have been looking at topic sentences.my teacher made  topic sentences for us and we got to choose a  topic sentences.I have choose this sentence,They put me is a dark rook with  no window. Here is My paragraph!


They put me in a dark room without any windows.As Istruggled and screamed “No no no why are you putting me in here what did I do”.I was terrified with horror.As I sat there I stared at the fogy air thinking what I have done.

The Limodons

Hi for the last few week we have been writing about our fantasy characters.  We created our characters last year. I have made this writing because I wanted to explain what my  characters life is like and that they do. Any way here is my writing.

                                Lomodons

Limodons are a type of fantasy human that lives on a group of islands.

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The Limodons are a lime green fantasy human.They are the same shape as a human. Limodons have three stripes on their back. In the middle stripe there are big spicks. On the face there are two blue eyes,two light green ears and one nose and a mouth.

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Limodons live on a group of islands. Most of the islands are first but and some is sand. To protect their world they need to fly. So there are dragons in the world and they and tame them. When they tame them they can fly them and go to other islands.they also can turn blue then they are flying to they do not get eaten are knocked of the dragons.

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Limodons have lots of purposes. The first thing is that they help small animals grow by protecting them. spikes helps them when a big animal tries to eat them they turn around and the animal eats the spikes and the spikes grow back.

Over all  this huge and amazing world is only for Limodons. If you had a chance would you live on it?

Crystal the wolf with power

hi this is a blog comment from last year here it is

One day a wolf named Crystal was lurking in his base in the Mountains of antarctica.He went  out to go hunting he went to the bottom of the mountains . the ice was very slippery. He slid down.He  went out to go hunting he went to the bottom of the mountains .

When he got to the bottom  he went to the water  and looked for some  fish in the water. He found  a fish in the water he jumped and swam in go and get it. He was a good swimmer. He grabbed a good meal for the day.

He went to the base and when he arrived to the bace and bace was robbed. It was a polar bear he ran after it for an hour.  We lost him. i went home sad but  I got a meal. After  he eat the fish the polar bear came back. I could not let him run away. Sneaked  and followed him to his base.

when he arrived to the polar bears back it looked like a dead end so I gave him a big tour.he went in the bace. He pressed a button and the ground went down. I do not know how he did that. Then he came back up and said I will give you all your stuff if you kill my arch enemy. Ok I will do it said crystal.

So the polar bear  went the find him. After 10 minutes  the polar     bear  said the enemy is a snow leopard. In his head he said  can I kill it without getting killed by the snow leopard. I think I could kill  it. After 20 minutes we got to the snow leopard house I said what is your name To the polar bear. My name is dagger

. Ok let's go in. nok nok. Hi said the leopard. You again. I want to challenge you to a fight. Ok. its like you would kill  even if it was 2 vs 1. I was first I ran at him.  I was too weak he had  hit me in the chest. I went home.

The next three years I  was training to beat that snow leopard. Next morning crystal want to the river. He found a wolf that was poor. Crystal went to him he was confused because he did not see a wolf in this plase .

Hi I am crystal would you like to live with me up in the mountain. Yes please said the poor wolf the last 16 days they have been  training. One day crystal said can you help me  beat the snow leopard. No I can give you powers. Ok. I will give you the hunting power said the poor wolf. I will say some special words.

I somen the hunting power to crystal the wolf.so he went to get dagger and said i am ready to fight him again ok let's go. they knocked  on the door and said can I fight you again ok. He ran at me and Bit me. Now it was my turn I bit him with a strong bit. The snow leapered  was dead and the wolf got his stuff back

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