Crystal the wolf with power

hi this is a blog comment from last year here it is

One day a wolf named Crystal was lurking in his base in the Mountains of antarctica.He went  out to go hunting he went to the bottom of the mountains . the ice was very slippery. He slid down.He  went out to go hunting he went to the bottom of the mountains .

When he got to the bottom  he went to the water  and looked for some  fish in the water. He found  a fish in the water he jumped and swam in go and get it. He was a good swimmer. He grabbed a good meal for the day.

He went to the base and when he arrived to the bace and bace was robbed. It was a polar bear he ran after it for an hour.  We lost him. i went home sad but  I got a meal. After  he eat the fish the polar bear came back. I could not let him run away. Sneaked  and followed him to his base.

when he arrived to the polar bears back it looked like a dead end so I gave him a big tour.he went in the bace. He pressed a button and the ground went down. I do not know how he did that. Then he came back up and said I will give you all your stuff if you kill my arch enemy. Ok I will do it said crystal.

So the polar bear  went the find him. After 10 minutes  the polar     bear  said the enemy is a snow leopard. In his head he said  can I kill it without getting killed by the snow leopard. I think I could kill  it. After 20 minutes we got to the snow leopard house I said what is your name To the polar bear. My name is dagger

. Ok let's go in. nok nok. Hi said the leopard. You again. I want to challenge you to a fight. Ok. its like you would kill  even if it was 2 vs 1. I was first I ran at him.  I was too weak he had  hit me in the chest. I went home.

The next three years I  was training to beat that snow leopard. Next morning crystal want to the river. He found a wolf that was poor. Crystal went to him he was confused because he did not see a wolf in this plase .

Hi I am crystal would you like to live with me up in the mountain. Yes please said the poor wolf the last 16 days they have been  training. One day crystal said can you help me  beat the snow leopard. No I can give you powers. Ok. I will give you the hunting power said the poor wolf. I will say some special words.

I somen the hunting power to crystal the wolf.so he went to get dagger and said i am ready to fight him again ok let's go. they knocked  on the door and said can I fight you again ok. He ran at me and Bit me. Now it was my turn I bit him with a strong bit. The snow leapered  was dead and the wolf got his stuff back

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the frist day of swimming

On the 16 of October we went to the first swimming lesson of the year.  We went to the bus it had a driver she was very nice. When we got to Canterbury swim school we got changed  I was in the warm pool. In my group there was Anthony, Quaid, Shania and me. The first thing was bubble breathing. It was fun. My goal is to get in to the big pool by 1 week but the big pool with my friends. 

Here is a video and a photo

Too Many Possums

  W.A.L.T. make a bran storm about possums and what they do.

 weWe have a big problem in NZ with possums they eat the trees and native plant and animals in NZ here is a mindmup. we got the information  from a book called Too Many possums and off the internet.

math DLO for Friday 22th of September

hi today our W.A.L.T. finding percentages  I hope you like it

The big gift

W.A.L.T:

I know I will be successful when I can…..

• Create a description of the scene using similes and metaphors.

• Write in correct sentences.
• Use paragraphs correctly
• Use adjectives
• Begin sentences with different/ interesting sentence starters.

Sun was going down behind the pacific ocean. The clouds were pink mixed with red. It was a long day. The houses there were big and colorful. I was flying up above the clouds with my friend delivering babies,kittens, and puppies. It was a good view. The clouds were as fluffy as cotton candy.

First up was a baby called Rachel she was born in 2011 and she is a newborn. We took it to a house at 58/A red rose st.The mother was waiting at the window. We gave it to her and I went off.

The Next one was the kittens. A family of 4 wanted 2 kittens because they wanted them for there  kids. They wanted a pet.

The last one it was my turn. It was a cute puppy. the owner  of the adult dog had  ordered one.

We went back to the cloud makers. There not just clouds they have faces. They can make stuff out of clouds and electrocuted the cloud so they can turn real.

“Ah you are back” said the cloud

“Yes I am”

They were making cat and dog the cloud made the dog a chew toy and a bone.Once again they made a baby but babies cri so they made him a sacer  ball the a helmet. They put the baby in the cotton  bag and took off. Under  the  white clouds was the rain cloud.It was  gray and black. The rain cloud made a crocodile and gave it to the stork. He was very nervous because it was his first time.When I got back my fathers were gone of my wing.

“Ooo that must of hurt.

When I got back he was making a rame.I thought it was a puppy but it was not. I went and delivered it.It was hitting me. When I got back  He made a sheep but when he made it real It was a headshoge the spines were all over my wings.he put it on the bag.The bag had lots of holes in it so I took it and went off. When i got back there was spines in my head. The gray cloud took it out of my head.he gave me a shark.I said it was too much . I got a armor suit and put it on. He gave me a eel it was fun delivering things

The end

The fire slide

  

W.A.L.T    I know I will be successful when I can…..

• Write in correct sentences.
• Use paragraphs correctly
• Use adjectives

We are wrting about a video about A boy going down a slide and falling in to a pit full of balls here is the link

My bones were chilling with fear I am afraid of heights.I was going on the biggest  fire slide in town. My hands were sweating. I needed to go down but I could not go back down  the stairs  because  people were waiting. I pushed  myself down the fire slide. When I got to the end I started to feel that I was not scared any more.

But then I started to think that the ball pit was too deep like the south pacific ocean.I started to sink in even more . I could  not even have a single breath. My feet started to slip. It was because there was nothing under me. I fell in head first into a new place. It was very dark, I landed in an Island that was not stable but it is stable enough that I could stand on them.There was a rainbow lollipop that was licked and stuck to my face . I  got back up and looked  up as I could just see the top. I can do it but it will be hard.I started to climb up the steep mountain of pit balls.I was slipping but I needed to go to the top before my mum started to worry. I jumped to the other Island, it looked safer. My feet slipped on a little boys boomerang.  I was just about to grab  the edge  and climbed again. I was climbing so fast. I stopped. There was  a bandage falling to my nose. Aaaaachoo. I was thinking that it was the end . But I grabbed something. It was a half eaten lollipop. I stuck it onto the huge mountain. When I got to the top I found out that the lollipop had hair and dirt. But I still ate it

                                       By David

         The end  

How To Make Slime

Today we are making slime with my group 

Anthony,Tom,Jasper and me we are using borax slime 

we are making slime because we have a thing called mable day. We need to get 100 marbles if we do things that is right

to make it we need

washable pva glue         

borax bower 

water

merging cup

bowl

spoon

food coloring

here is the link

please give me feed back in slime

the war piano

I know I will be successful when …

• Re-call what is happening in the video.
• Use adjectives and experiment with language features.
• Use paragraphs correctly.
• Begin sentences with different/ interesting sentence started

I was in my garage then I found my old piano.I took it out and dusted it. I found the legendary music book. I was playing my favorite song.It took  me back to my old life when my wife was alive. She died of  old age.

I dreamed that she gave me a kiss of love as she disappeared  briefly. That kiss reminded me of when  I was to the war and she gave me the last kiss.My brother was in the war with me. As soon as he loaded  his sniper. He  looked over the wall and …. Bang! My brother got shot in the chest. It  was the end  of his live. He got shot to save my life.

It made me cry. As I was typing away a little 5 year boy came  to me  I  gave him a blue bot. He opened it. It was  a toy horse  made out of wood. I gave him it because I had a horse in the war. The 5 year old boy came and sat on the comfy seat  next to me his grandad.

Add fractions together using multiplication.

W.A.L.T Add fractions together using multiplication.  

Today we are going to do some add fractions together using multiplication.  Please comment on my blog.I hope you learn thing from this video.

Hornby Primary school wensday Extravaganza

W.A.L.T to do live performances in front of people we don't know.

This term we have been working on a live  performances and Hornby high school. Our theme was NZ music month. We got lots of NZ song from 2001 and under.Me and my group where doing six month in a leaky boat. My group and I needed to wear a blue and white stripey t-shirt. Every one who was preforming came at 6;pm but the show started at 6;30. The class went behind the auditorium and waited for a bit. When it was our classes  turn the songs went in the order  I see red,chains,six months in a  leaky boat,slice of  heaven,sway, How bizarre,and  gutter black. At the end the hole class where doing why does love do this to me. It was a fun week. I hope you liked it  please comment bye.

Time line about Sir Edmund hillary

W.A.L.T we have been learning to do a time line about Sir Edmund Hillary

We go a book called mountaineer it was about Sir Edmund Hillary and his life. our teacher got two websites about  him and we went to explore in the two sites and we needed to make a time line about him. 

what is a time line? a time line is a dates  of some one but the date some writing and a photo. 

The ridge

I was in my boat. I was going to the mountains so I could  go mountain biking.

I was seeing lots of stuff that a I have  not seen before. I was seeing seals scattered around the place.

When I arrived I hopped off  my boat and got my mountain  bike and started my journey. It was going to be a bumpy ride. I went on and I was out of site.  I did  some little jumps.

I jumped on a big bolder and I went across a small log to a big and hire bolder.I  pushed myself down. I do didn't full off any of them. I was time to start the big journey up the mountain. At the start it was easy because there was a path. When I got to half way I could not ride it because it was too steep so I cared it when I got I came back down it was very bumpy when I got to my boat it was gone.I guess it is not a bad place to live after all.

24 hour time

W.A.L.T learning to tell 24 hour time.

why do we use 24 times? if you are a truck driver and Pilates.

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