Hi this week we have been looking at topic sentences.my teacher made topic sentences for us and we got to choose a topic sentences.I have choose this sentence,They put me is a dark rook with no window. Here is My paragraph!
They put me in a dark room without any windows.As Istruggled and screamed “No no no why are you putting me in here what did I do”.I was terrified with horror.As I sat there I stared at the fogy air thinking what I have done.
Thursday, August 23, 2018
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Hello my name is Harry from Marshland school the thing that I liked about your starting sentence David is that you explained everything that you knew. Did you think about adding a image? I recommend next time adding in your punctuation like leaving a space after your full stop. But for now bye
ReplyDeleteThank you Harry for the comment next time I will do what you said.
ReplyDeleteYeah thanks for replying to my comment.
ReplyDeleteMy favourite part is I liked the way you that you use speech marks some people don't. Next time, you could do a space between like a full stop.Did you think about adding a image it will really be good for the pragraft
ReplyDeleteyeah he did a pretty good job!
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