Hi David I really like your slideshow because you added lost of details. Make sure you put a fullstop at the end of yor story. Next time don't put your work in diffrent colours becuase it kind of hard to see.
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hi david amazing work next time an a slide to say good bye
ReplyDeleteHi David I really like your slideshow because you added lost of details. Make sure you put a fullstop at the end of yor story. Next time don't put your work in diffrent colours becuase it kind of hard to see.
ReplyDeleteThank you for commenting on my blog. Next time I will do One color. Can you reread your comment for it to make sense.
DeleteHi Kya thank you for commenting on my blog. Next time can you tell me what I did right and that I did wrong.
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