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Friday, August 11, 2017

The ridge

I was in my boat. I was going to the mountains so I could  go mountain biking.
I was seeing lots of stuff that a I have  not seen before. I was seeing seals scattered around the place.
When I arrived I hopped off  my boat and got my mountain  bike and started my journey. It was going to be a bumpy ride. I went on and I was out of site.  I did  some little jumps.
I jumped on a big bolder and I went across a small log to a big and hire bolder.I  pushed myself down. I do didn't full off any of them. I was time to start the big journey up the mountain. At the start it was easy because there was a path. When I got to half way I could not ride it because it was too steep so I cared it when I got I came back down it was very bumpy when I got to my boat it was gone.I guess it is not a bad place to live after all.

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2 comments:

  1. tomAugust 16, 2017 at 9:40 AM

    Hi David, it's Tom here. This writing blew my head off, I mean it.You had used lots of juicy words and I liked the way you used punctuation correctly. Sometimes you used extra spaces and missed capital letters so maybe next time, you could concentrate on that. Tom Out

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  2. AnonymousAugust 17, 2017 at 10:55 AM

    Hi I love your story but when you said. So I cared it and said I got I came back down, It didn't make sense.

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