Hi for the last few weeks we have been looking at Fairy Tales.We have looked at three stories; The three little pigs, Jack and the Beanstalk and Goldilocks. I have made a DLO about our Venn diagram and here it is.
Tuesday, August 14, 2018
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Hi David,
ReplyDeleteI really like your reading Venn diagram about all three stories. I liked it because you have put your ideas into sentences, I have learnt that probably using sentences are better then just putting one subject into a idea. But next time you could work on putting more detail in it and more ideas before posting it on you're blog. But hey you have done a really good job, oh and like the background.
Anyway nice job keep it up !!
Hi David,
ReplyDeleteI like how you have used a colour for the background so it stands out. Maybe next time you could add more derail into your work. Keep up the good work.BYE
Hi david
ReplyDeleteI really like how you put them separate and bigger. I also like your background that you made the color that can see your writing. If you done the best as you can you will just get better at blogging.Next time you should put more because I don't understand your Venn diagram maybe next time you reread your blog post andp add some more on your Venn diagram. But still you re improving your blog post and keep up the good work.
KIA ora David, my name is Caleb from Marshland School. I love this upload on Fairy tales. Your upload has such a good lay out and good little bits of information. But in my opinion maybe just a little more of this great information would be good. .I did not realise that in Jack and the Beanstalk, Jack sold his cow for the seed. One question, what is the name of the small girl in Goldilocks and the three bears?. Great upload over all and keep up the good work.
ReplyDeleteHi Caleb Thank you for commenting on my blog. The name of the small girl in Goldilocks and the three bears was Goldilocks.I will add more information.once again thank you.
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