Hi guys To today for writing we worked on sentence structure our teacher picked a sentence and we needed to make it more better. Here it is.
We played a game for hours.
The purple dog played a game for hours.
The purple dog played a game for 56 hours.
The purple dog played a game of blue dog for 56 hours.
The purple dog played a game of blue dog with a red dog for 56 hours.
the purple dog played a game of blue dog with a red dog for 56 hours in a las vegas casino.
the purple dog played a interesting game of blue dog with a red dog for 56 hours in a las vegas casino.
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