W.A.L.T Write an information report that informs the audience.
Success Criteria
I know I will be successful when….
- I use an opening statement that explains the subject of the report.
- The opening statement is followed by sentences that describe the event; what you saw, what you did, how you felt, what you learnt.
- Each paragraph focuses on a different aspect of the topic; travelling, the beach, the lagoon walk, playground.
- A general statement about the topic usually rounds off the report.
Hi on Friday we went to the beach at Spenser park we got lots of shells. I needed to make a drawing in my book. This is my sculpture made out of four sticks and nine shells. It took my three days to do it without breaking and waiting for the hot glue gun. My friend gave me the stick that stands up the sculpture. My sculpture is called the A of power. I called it that because it looks like an A and the power is inside the A.
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