W.A.L.T Write an information report that informs the audience.
Success Criteria
I know I will be successful when….
- I use an opening statement that explains the subject of the report.
- The opening statement is followed by sentences that describe the event; what you saw, what you did, how you felt, what you learnt.
- Each paragraph focuses on a different aspect of the topic; travelling, the beach, the lagoon walk, playground.
- A general statement about the topic usually rounds off the report.
Spencer Park
On Friday room 11 , 12 , 1 and 2 went to Spencer park. We went to have fun and learn new stuff. I was excited to get on the bus and travel to Spencer Park. I sat with Tom and talked about games.
I went to the wetlands first. It was a long walk. We went to the bird hide out. We went in groups up there so the birds don't fly away. The birds were big and they were white and black. The white one had a big,long beak.
After we got down, we had morning tea. I ate my cheese and crackers. After morning tea we went back to the first meeting.
The next thing we did went to the beach I took off my shoes and socks. The sand was so soft as a pillow.We went to the water and found lots of shells. I found a big one a full one. I found a snail shell. At the end we had how can make the biggest sand castle. In my team was Jamie and Kaden.
I found some new shells some sea weed and lots of big sticks and I got one the size of a medium size tree. The big brunch could not be put on the sand castle.
The third thing we did we went to have lunch at the playground I eat some watermelon, nutella and grapes.I went to fill my drink bottle because I was thirsty. The water was yuck.
Where was apples and plums I took a apple and after that we went on the bus and sat next to Hunter I was sleeping on the bus. I learnt on this trip that not all birds eat insects.
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