The big gift

W.A.L.T:

I know I will be successful when I can…..

• Create a description of the scene using similes and metaphors.

• Write in correct sentences.
• Use paragraphs correctly
• Use adjectives
• Begin sentences with different/ interesting sentence starters.

Sun was going down behind the pacific ocean. The clouds were pink mixed with red. It was a long day. The houses there were big and colorful. I was flying up above the clouds with my friend delivering babies,kittens, and puppies. It was a good view. The clouds were as fluffy as cotton candy.

First up was a baby called Rachel she was born in 2011 and she is a newborn. We took it to a house at 58/A red rose st.The mother was waiting at the window. We gave it to her and I went off.

The Next one was the kittens. A family of 4 wanted 2 kittens because they wanted them for there  kids. They wanted a pet.

The last one it was my turn. It was a cute puppy. the owner  of the adult dog had  ordered one.

We went back to the cloud makers. There not just clouds they have faces. They can make stuff out of clouds and electrocuted the cloud so they can turn real.

“Ah you are back” said the cloud

“Yes I am”

They were making cat and dog the cloud made the dog a chew toy and a bone.Once again they made a baby but babies cri so they made him a sacer  ball the a helmet. They put the baby in the cotton  bag and took off. Under  the  white clouds was the rain cloud.It was  gray and black. The rain cloud made a crocodile and gave it to the stork. He was very nervous because it was his first time.When I got back my fathers were gone of my wing.

“Ooo that must of hurt.

When I got back he was making a rame.I thought it was a puppy but it was not. I went and delivered it.It was hitting me. When I got back  He made a sheep but when he made it real It was a headshoge the spines were all over my wings.he put it on the bag.The bag had lots of holes in it so I took it and went off. When i got back there was spines in my head. The gray cloud took it out of my head.he gave me a shark.I said it was too much . I got a armor suit and put it on. He gave me a eel it was fun delivering things

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