The fire slide

  

W.A.L.T    I know I will be successful when I can…..

• Write in correct sentences.
• Use paragraphs correctly
• Use adjectives

We are wrting about a video about A boy going down a slide and falling in to a pit full of balls here is the link

My bones were chilling with fear I am afraid of heights.I was going on the biggest  fire slide in town. My hands were sweating. I needed to go down but I could not go back down  the stairs  because  people were waiting. I pushed  myself down the fire slide. When I got to the end I started to feel that I was not scared any more.

But then I started to think that the ball pit was too deep like the south pacific ocean.I started to sink in even more . I could  not even have a single breath. My feet started to slip. It was because there was nothing under me. I fell in head first into a new place. It was very dark, I landed in an Island that was not stable but it is stable enough that I could stand on them.There was a rainbow lollipop that was licked and stuck to my face . I  got back up and looked  up as I could just see the top. I can do it but it will be hard.I started to climb up the steep mountain of pit balls.I was slipping but I needed to go to the top before my mum started to worry. I jumped to the other Island, it looked safer. My feet slipped on a little boys boomerang.  I was just about to grab  the edge  and climbed again. I was climbing so fast. I stopped. There was  a bandage falling to my nose. Aaaaachoo. I was thinking that it was the end . But I grabbed something. It was a half eaten lollipop. I stuck it onto the huge mountain. When I got to the top I found out that the lollipop had hair and dirt. But I still ate it

                                       By David

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