I know I will be successful when …
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Re-call what is happening in the video.
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Use adjectives and experiment with language features.
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Use paragraphs correctly.
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Begin sentences with different/ interesting sentence started
I was in my garage then I found my old piano.I took it out and dusted it. I found the legendary music book. I was playing my favorite song.It took me back to my old life when my wife was alive. She died of old age.
I dreamed that she gave me a kiss of love as she disappeared briefly. That kiss reminded me of when I was to the war and she gave me the last kiss.My brother was in the war with me. As soon as he loaded his sniper. He looked over the wall and …. Bang! My brother got shot in the chest. It was the end of his live. He got shot to save my life.
It made me cry. As I was typing away a little 5 year boy came to me I gave him a blue bot. He opened it. It was a toy horse made out of wood. I gave him it because I had a horse in the war. The 5 year old boy came and sat on the comfy seat next to me his grandad.
Re-call what is happening in the video.
Use adjectives and experiment with language features.
Use paragraphs correctly.
Begin sentences with different/ interesting sentence started
I was in my garage then I found my old piano.I took it out and dusted it. I found the legendary music book. I was playing my favorite song.It took me back to my old life when my wife was alive. She died of old age.
I dreamed that she gave me a kiss of love as she disappeared briefly. That kiss reminded me of when I was to the war and she gave me the last kiss.My brother was in the war with me. As soon as he loaded his sniper. He looked over the wall and …. Bang! My brother got shot in the chest. It was the end of his live. He got shot to save my life.
It made me cry. As I was typing away a little 5 year boy came to me I gave him a blue bot. He opened it. It was a toy horse made out of wood. I gave him it because I had a horse in the war. The 5 year old boy came and sat on the comfy seat next to me his grandad.
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