Simple To Complex Sentences
Hi, guys welcome back to my blog. On Wednesday we have a writing test. Today our teacher gave us a simple sentence and we needed to make it longer and more interesting. The sentence was the dog ate. Here is how I transformed this boring sentence into a better one.
The dog ate.
The dog ate wildly.
In the evening the dog ate wildly.
In the evening the dog ate wildly because he was fighting for food as he stood shivering in the cold.
Thank you for reading my blog. Hope to have a better idea about how to make a simple sentence to a better one.
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