Hi, guys today our teacher told us to write A 100-word challenge. We make a story about this picture. Here are my picture and my writing.
There I was standing in Dubai between thousands of plastic soldiers. Well, that’s what I thought at the
start. I have heard about a rumour that the plastic soldiers stealing your stuff. While I was wandering
around I lost my mum so I decided to call her. I put my hand in my pocket and …
start. I have heard about a rumour that the plastic soldiers stealing your stuff. While I was wandering
around I lost my mum so I decided to call her. I put my hand in my pocket and …
there was nothing in there. I knew that it was the soldiers I went to buy a hammer to smash them but
I realised I had no money because my credit card was in my phone case. I checked my pocket. It was
there again.
I realised I had no money because my credit card was in my phone case. I checked my pocket. It was
there again.
Kia ora David, I really enjoyed this 100 word challenge that you have written, It has an element of surprise which I really love. Maybe next time you could add in some similes, metaphors or onomatopoeia to add more interest to your story.
ReplyDeleteKeep up the great work!